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Thursday, January 27, 2011

My story on Cinderella

Cinderella

           Strolling thought best buy because my dad finally said that I could get a cell phone because my dad is going on a business trip, "dad can I get this one" I asked as I pointed to a black berry.
"No, how about this one." as he picked up a flip phone and checked out its features.
"But daddy why not," sadly acting like a two year old.
"Because I said so and I'm the parent," he said strictly
"Please,"
"OK than. I will get one too so we can BBM each other while I'm gone."
'Yay! I love you so much,"


Three days later.
Breaking news 
Air Canada has just been in a major crash in the Atlantic ocean and there are no survivors to be found.


The next day
"No,No I don't want to live with you. I hate you, you should have never married my dad he's to good for you. Anyways your mean, horrible, and you love pink to much." With a hard smack her hand flies across my face with a loud booming voice following, "To bad. Your father is gone now and is never coming back so I as your mother will take care of you."


Caroline in rolled me in elementary school. Since I'm 13 now I have to work for her . Its bad enough I am a nobody but now i have to work for her. My only friends are Jacklin and Janess. There both really nice but I just wish I was one of the popular kids.
"I'm not afraid, I'm not afraid to take a stand... oh hello Cinderella what troubles you for you to call me?"
"who are you? what let me guess your my fairy god mother to come grant my wish of being popular." I said sarcastically
"well no I'm the cookie monster but I am hear to grant your wish on being popular all you have to do is bring your cell phone to school tomorrow and take it out of your pocket during lunch than I will do the rest."


The next day at lunch


"Wow Cinderella that's so cool that you have a cell phone.You know what Cinderella you should hang out with us but one rule only two days a week OK?" she asked me in such a relaxed a cool way. In one big gasp I said "sure," in a excited way, "like totally." once they left and were out of my sight I quickly turn around to Jacklin and Janess and said "OMG did you hear that Rapunzel and the kool crew want me to hang out with them!"
"ya but only two days a week so I doubt that it will last."


Since I was so excited the moment I walked through the big pink door I blabbed out " I'm popular.Woo Hoo go me, go me go me..."
"Cinderella what on earth are you doing?"
"uh nothing. Why?"
"well as you walked in I heard you screaming out I'm popular and other things so I just wanted to know what all that was about?"
" well if you must know Rapunzel and her crew ask me of all people to hang out with her."
"really? you got Rapunzel to let you hang out with her."
"yup I'll even prov it. Watch."


text message
Rapunzel did u say i could
hang out with u :D


reply
ya like totally
but part time
TTYL


"see I told you." I said happily because I am finally right
"wow.Since your cool now well part time I'll let you chose some cool things to stay at the top."
"yes," I said so joyfully, "so can I get a laptop and a IPhone."
"sure why not but remember you still have to work for me. Just because you are 1/2 popular doesn't mean you can skip your chores and go to party's." she said in a strict way
"OK"
"now get back to work."
" OK." I said  quietly.


As I walked off to clean her room I thought to myself since I have a phone why don't i listen to music. "bottoms up,bottoms up up... RING RING "hello Carolin residents Cinderella speaking how may I help you?"
"hey kinder. It's Jacky whats up?"
" nothing just cleaning and listening to music. you?"
"just the usual spying of course and guess what I heard? I heard that a curtain Clark Ken has a little crush on a certain kinder surprise."
"are you serious I've had a crush on him since like ever.He's like so cool and dating him would be so cool and he could even get my cool quotation even higher."
" cool, cool, cool that's all you ever talk about why don't you talk about normal stuff like American idol and why don't you like to hang out with me and Janess"
"OK,OK. why don't we skype so I don't have to hold the phone while I work"
"OK lates."


After the skype talk with Lil Cinderella received a message on facebook from a certain someone. It read


text message
uh so kinder I have a ? 4 u
uh well do u want to be my
g friend?


text yes to 12345
or
text no to 12345


reply
yes


Months pasted and Clark and I are still together.The home coming dance is coming up and Clark and I are going together I have a dress I'll send you a pic



see isn't it pretty? yup I knew it


The day of the home coming dance


"Noooooooooooo, my dress is ruined. Sylvester what did you do? now I can't go to the home coming dance." so as I was sobbing I ran up to my room when the cookie monster appears once again beside me saying, "what happened? why are you so sad?" in a soft and calming voice.
"Sylvester tor my home coming dress up into pieces now I have nothing to wear and my make-up is running." I said very sadly and still sobbing.
"it's OK I'll make it all better I'm not afraid I'm not a"
"by singing" I asked looking very confused
" just watch I'm not afraid I'm not afraid."
PUFF





"wow how did you do that?"
"magic."
"thank you so much now I can go to the home coming dance."
" not in that pink dinosaur out there your not. I have a better ride."
" a limo. really your the best"
"well go ahead bye"
"thanks again"


At the dance

text message to all
vote Cinderella and Clark
4 home coming queen and king.

" hello children to nights king and queen are.................. Cinderella and Clark. Come up here you to and come get your crowns."
"Woooooooo" everyone cheers in unison. As me and my boyfriend walked up all I had to say was "thank you all very much for voting for me and Clark as home coming king and queen.

The next day

" I the queen of  home coming and the most popular kid in school declare Jacklin and Janess are cool and Rapunzel and her crew are not." I said it proudly with all my closest friends beside

THE END!

7 comments:

  1. Hehe, it was cool that Cinderella and Clark were homecoming queen and king! I didn't know Rapunzel was that cool either! Pfft, I thought I was cooler. I'm going to go eat some triple cheezburgers. TTYL -Shaggy


    In other words, very nice story. -Mihai

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  2. I really like that story Bonco. you could have made it a luttle shorter though, anyway it was a great story.

    julia

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  3. to shaggy

    hope you like the triple chezburgers

    to mihai

    thax

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  4. to julia

    thax to you too. i know it was really long but i had no idea to make it shorter cuz when i start typing i just cant stop

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  5. So, Bonko, That was very original... I couldn't believe how nice the stepmother was :) And I love the pictures <3

    Sincerely,
    Pocahontas

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  6. You have a AMASING, amd well organized story, and the images you added where a nice touch!

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  7. I love your story but if I were you I would think of changing my name. Cinderella could still be a facebook name or something. (Just to be safe)

    Sincerely,
    Coraline

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